Beauty

Beauty so angelic, glows on your sleeping face, tempts me to touch and caress its splendour. Divine smile lights it up, as my fingertips play with your sleeping beauty which seems God like. © kashinath karmakar By:kashinath karmakar (14th April 2011) ============================ Placement:7th ;(April 2011) Contest:Traditional Cinquain Contest Sponsor:Catie Lindsey ============================ Placement:3rd ;(June 2011) Contest:Any poem of 2011 Sponsor:Brian Strand ============================

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2011 8:52:00 PM

so nice to see you won twice with this one, Kash. A belated congrats on your win with Brian. YEAAA.

Joseph Osita

Date: 6/11/2011 9:21:00 AM

Very beautiful.Congrats on your meritorious win! Cheers*

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2011 8:36:00 AM

So breathtaking, just the most simple poetry, can speak with the most beautiful words known ....with such little pomp and fanfare...pure lovliness! Congratulations!!

Cory Long

Date: 6/11/2011 7:46:00 AM

congrats on your win with this great piece. cory

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/11/2011 1:35:00 AM

congrats on your win, kashi... stunning! :) huggs

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/13/2011 6:29:00 AM

Vividly written...I can almost see your words take physical form on the page!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2011 7:24:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Kashinath. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 4/19/2011 11:56:00 AM

this is simply beautiful... sleep can be such a beautiful thing

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations Kashinath on your well deserved win in Catie's contest "Traditional Cinquain". Love, Carol

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/19/2011 4:04:00 AM

Beautiful poetry, very artistically done Kashi.Many Congratulations on your well deserved win.Best wishes,Gautami

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/17/2011 7:17:00 PM

Sweet cinquain! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/17/2011 10:11:00 AM

Kash, congratulations on your win in Catie's contest :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/17/2011 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/17/2011 12:06:00 AM

Congrats on this win with your very sweet cinquain, Kashinath :D!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2011 11:13:00 PM

congratulations on your placement, Kash. A really good placement! Luv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/16/2011 8:56:00 PM

lovely, congrats on your win in the contest Kashinath

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/16/2011 2:33:00 PM

Oh yes..love brings such beauty..wonderful tender write Congrad's Light & Love

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/16/2011 2:31:00 PM

You poem is very nice as always. Very deserving of its placement. Charles

Jack Horne

Date: 4/16/2011 2:04:00 PM

Many congrats again, Kash : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2011 1:31:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your big win in this contest luv.. an exciting entry full of beauty..enjoy another top ten win..

Emma Mantle

Date: 4/16/2011 11:47:00 AM

This is a great write. Beautiful indeed! Congrats, best wishes Em :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2011 5:58:00 AM

Happy Weekend Kash my friend.. have fun and be happy as u creative wonderful poetry luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2011 7:19:00 PM

looking at this one again. a beauty for sure. Are you going to take my challenge with the ten words I gave you? My first contest at the soup, I used ten beautiful words and got some wonderful poetry from them. I wonder if the winners of that old contest can be found anymore here at Soup!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2011 7:01:00 PM

Super words Kash and good luck in the contest.. moving and touching write luv..