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Beauty

She stared into the mirror, wished she could utter the Queen's request. "Mirror, mirror on the wall...." What was the use? She was not beautiful. Nor was she rich. No plastic surgery for her. Oh to be beautiful, men admiring her, she'd be always in control, beckoning, ordering, playing, partying. But her face was not beautiful, passable perhaps, but not beautiful. Was it any use for her to wish the impossible? Was beauty so important? The media thinks so. Look at all the ads. Cream for this, cream for that, slimming, poises, massages, trimming. She picks up her brush. Yes, her hair was beautiful, smooth like a luscious green meadow. She smiled. Her face lit up. Incredible how such small lips could produce such an effect. Even the old woman whom she helped yesterday said so. You have a lovely smile and a big heart, she had said. But she did not say she was beautiful. Nor did her husband ever tell her so. He just called her "My treasure." And they always made love in perfect harmony, uplifting their hearts, passion uncontained. Again she smiled. Soon he'll be home for dinner and love. Did she need to be beautiful? Did she need to change her life? Was not all she possessed all for the best? Again she smiled. Her face, not beautiful perhaps, lit up in joy.

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Date: 2/8/2023 12:47:00 PM
Ahh!! Glad she saw what beauty was all about. I enjoyed reading this one. Your share was inspirational. Sara
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Date: 11/24/2020 1:53:00 AM
what a lovely poem you have penned! truly enjoyable
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Date: 11/10/2020 12:22:00 PM
WoW! Victor, You are an amazing story teller. I enjoyed this from start to finish. The old saying rings true” Beauty is in the eye of the beholder “. I believe that true beauty is not physical. Even the most beautiful woman in the world won’t always beautiful in the physical sense. Therefore one beauty must shine from within. The lady in your was beautiful to all that loved her. Excellent job. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/9/2020 12:48:00 PM
You painted a beautiful portrait, Victor :)
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Date: 11/7/2020 11:20:00 PM
Her husbands love was enough to make her beautiful. My husband always said what is inside was what made a person beautiful . Nicely done , Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/7/2020 6:46:00 PM
She probably owned her own personal beauty, and a a smile can radiate on a face and turn everyone that much more lovely, thank you for sharing your heart dear friend, your poetry is always so delightful.
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Date: 11/7/2020 9:47:00 AM
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, and that is what this poem displays so well.
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Date: 11/6/2020 7:04:00 PM
She wouldn’t be his treasure if she wasn’t a beauty... Truly beautiful, I enjoyed it so much :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 7:38:00 PM
Victor, this is a great verse about beauty, and love and acceptance. The happy ending fits well with your poem.
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Date: 11/5/2020 7:32:00 PM
As long as you have people in your life who love you for who you are, you don't need to be beautiful. I love this awesome poem. :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 6:47:00 PM
Oh, Victor, your poem is truly beautiful. I love the feminine spirit, perspective, insecurities, and ultimately, the realization of this piece; "Was not all she possessed all for the best?" Exquisite poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/5/2020 6:17:00 PM
Her beauty can definitely be seen. Great poem, Victor. :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 10:26:00 AM
'Was not all she possessed all for the best?' -- Wonderful line, Victor. Lovely penned, and so true. 'Beauty is only skin deep,' as they say. Joy and Light, Gershon
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Date: 11/5/2020 7:22:00 AM
True beauty lies within, looks are not everything. Tom
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Date: 11/5/2020 5:41:00 AM
Aptly spoken. Her man should emphasize the beauty of her charm.
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Date: 11/5/2020 5:39:00 AM
Her beauty shines through your exquisite write, Victor-- that built her inner portrait for the reader--where real love is and beauty.
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Date: 11/5/2020 2:21:00 AM
- She has an inner beauty and that's all that matters - A lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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