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Beautifully Broken

Pretty girl dressed in white dancing in starlight tonight. Handsome boy dressed in black watches her and plans to attack. Lovely girl dressed in blue holds on to the loving hands of two. Gentle girl dressed in green silently watches the tragic scene. Bubbly girl dressed in pink writes it all down in her warm red ink. Lonely boy dressed in red has a million thoughts in his head. Now two more join this broken crew with all the colors and sadness too.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2016 10:48:00 AM

Cheyenne, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Cheyenne Long
Date: 10/27/2016 11:39:00 AM

I would love to have some criticism. It will help me get better on my poems.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/27/2016 8:53:00 AM

Good one , Cheyenne :)