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Beautiful Tragedy

Is this what you want? For me to stay unhappy? But it’s all good, I’m fine. Yeah right we know that’s just a lie. But wait. they don’t, only I do. I know it’s a lie. Every smile on my face, lie. It can easily just be erased. Because it’s not even real. Because I’m not even happy. Is this what you want? For me to build up walls, then watch them crumbling down? For me to hope I’m good enough, then find out that I’m still worthless. That’s what you want, isn’t it? If that’s what you wanted, then I hope your happy. ‘Cause all that’s left of me, is a beautiful tragedy.

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Date: 11/21/2015 10:37:00 PM
Hi Jazzlyn, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/18/2015 9:57:00 PM
Jazzlyn, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/18/2015 5:11:00 AM
- Hey Jazzlyn :) - A lovely time to start in an poetry club, autumn and winter is a time we spend a lot of time inside our homes - More time to read and write poetry - I wish you an enjoyable time and warm welcome :) -Thanks for your moving but, great first poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:51:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Jazzlyn it would be a pleasure to read your poems.please stop by my page too. This s a SLAM at what is experienced! Described the emotions. Cheers.
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:47:00 PM
Jazzlyn, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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