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'beautiful Sunset'

a sublime sky view oranges, yellows, bronze effects... mellow clouds blend in Entry: Sunset(Haiku) Sponsor: P.D. Written by: Carol Brown Written on: 11/05/2011 7th Place Winner

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Daver Austin

Date: 9/30/2015 10:27:00 AM

Love those "mellow clouds." Congrats. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 5:47:00 PM

Thank you Carol, for the visit... Stopping by to read this one again.. Linda

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/9/2012 11:14:00 AM

Beautiful Sun set, enjoyed after many days. Wonderful write, loved, bl

Anonymous Dreamer

Date: 12/5/2011 6:54:00 PM

Beautiful imagery! Congrats on your win and thanks for the warm welcome you gave me! :)

Sandy Mason

Date: 12/1/2011 2:18:00 PM

What a beautiful word picture written with such simplicity.

John Freeman

Date: 11/16/2011 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Carol. I've been reading a lot of Haiku down the list from you, Good luck in your endeavor. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2011 6:00:00 PM

Congrats Carol on another brilliant win for these mesmerizing lines of beautiful Haiku my friend... luv..to u...blessings too..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2011 12:32:00 PM

I knew this would be a winner, Carol. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Janette Fisher

Date: 11/8/2011 11:44:00 AM

Many congrats Carol on your wonderful haiku winning in PD's contest - luv Janette

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/8/2011 10:03:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku,Carol.Congratulations on your great win!

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 11/8/2011 8:16:00 AM

Congrats Carol for your win...:)

Shannon Deane

Date: 11/8/2011 7:14:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Carol...congrats to you for your win in the contest and thank you for your kind comments...luv shannon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2011 6:00:00 AM

Thank you everyone for your comments and congrats. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 11/8/2011 1:42:00 AM

Carol congrats on your great win..David

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/8/2011 1:34:00 AM

Nice Haiku,Carol.I love it esp-the sublime sky view.Congrats on your win....Thanks a million for your comments,your words serve as tonic.keep flying my good friend......shalom...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2011 10:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your lovely poem's win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/7/2011 10:00:00 PM

CAROL~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 11/8/2011 5:59:00 AM

Thank you P.D. for the placement in your contest. Love, Carol

Don Johnson

Date: 11/7/2011 9:35:00 PM

Congratulations on a great poem here Carol.

Don Johnson

Date: 11/7/2011 8:55:00 PM

sunset is the sweetest clime, when colors surely blend, thank you Carol for your time, the time with me you spend...

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/7/2011 8:48:00 PM

It's the blending in of these colours that I love the most, Carol. A picturesque view indeed. Love, Gwendolen

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/7/2011 2:30:00 PM

This is one bad mama jamma! I like your sunsets better than the ones I have been seeing lately. Pollution, Smog, Chem trails, Com trails, Armageddon looking clouds :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2011 12:31:00 PM

Very descriptive of a sunset..No two are alike..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 11/7/2011 6:14:00 AM

Wonderful sunset haiku Carol.Best wishes in the contest.

Kimberly Larocca

Date: 11/6/2011 7:32:00 PM

Beautiful as always, good luck.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/6/2011 4:12:00 PM

Lovely sunset Carol, best wishes in the contest!