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Beautiful Noise

The birds are chirping A brook is gurgling nearby Plenty of Spring sounds Beautiful noise surrounds me All this lovesick one can bear Russell Sivey Entrant into Chris D. Aechtner's "Many Of The Reasons Behind It All - Let The Masks Fall" contest 3/18/2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2012 10:44:00 PM

oh, and yes, forgot to say again, sorry about the arm. Is there a chance it will ever get better?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2012 10:43:00 PM

THe title is excellent for this sweet poem, Russell. that 's a lot of really beautiful noise to rub in your lovesickness!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/19/2012 4:34:00 PM

most beautiful sentiments are impressive in this little piece of poetry Russell.. luv the last line.. it is awesome and uplifts the poem .. good luck in the contesdt by Chris..luv..

Broken Butterfly

Date: 3/18/2012 11:21:00 PM

Beautiful Russell, best of luck

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2012 9:48:00 PM

Russell, very beautiful.... have yourself a good night~ always*PD

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/18/2012 1:07:00 PM

Great entry for the contest Rusty, the soundsof spring are so wonderful and they chase the stillness oif winter with their magic! :) So glad to hear school is not too bad. I hope it is all going well for you and it gets over with soon. Luv, Lizzie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/18/2012 10:43:00 AM

the lovesick feel gave this tanka its full flavor, russell... enjoyed the twirl in the end... awesome!.. best of luck and huggs as i greet you happy sunday!..:)