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Beautiful Nature Scene

There’s a church, quite gorgeous, with some stone walls Beauty escapes the top of the steeple The whole church enjoys the outside in fall There is rocky land here for the people Colorful flowers show off the windows Beauty escapes the top of the steeple Landscape accentuates the stream tadpoles The trees have just an all mighty stature Colorful flowers show off the windows The stream supplies water for the future I venture into this scene with a joy The trees have just an all mighty stature The church, the stream, and the land I enjoy The rocks, the flowers, and the trees I’m free I venture into the scene with a joy Nothing within this place makes me empty There’s a church, quite gorgeous, with some stone walls The rocks, the flowers, and the trees I’m free The whole church enjoys the outside in fall
Russell Sivey Contest: Nature Poems old/new Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A 5/21/2013

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Date: 5/24/2013 7:28:00 PM
Russell this is a wondrous poem. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/23/2013 8:55:00 PM
I love the fantastic beauty of the cathedral in your superb write & form my dear friend Russel! Kudos and big congratulations on your well-deserved grand win! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/23/2013 9:11:00 AM
Great job Russell. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Date: 5/23/2013 1:22:00 AM
Loved it, well done Russell....Seren
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Date: 5/22/2013 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations Russell A beautiful cathedral to Nature.
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Date: 5/22/2013 4:27:00 PM
This its so beautiful, loved reading it. Congratulations Russell. Terry
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Date: 5/22/2013 12:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, best wishes, S.
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Date: 5/22/2013 12:11:00 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS RUSSELL! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2013 10:17:00 AM
Russell, You have mastered the form. Beautifully crafted Terzanelle is worthy of it's place in this contest... I don't seem to have the flair to create one... Great writing, my friend.... Jake
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Date: 5/22/2013 8:49:00 AM
I can't help but enjoy this poem... it's as if I'm walking along in the poem... a venture, and a joy... Russell, you are one of the most amazing poets on the soup. And, you are right nothing in this poem makes the imagery of this poem empty. CONGRATULATIONS.... Linda
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Date: 5/21/2013 2:15:00 AM
- Yes, Russell very beautiful nature scene!! - Good luck in the contest, hope you will win. - Have a enjoyable day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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