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Beautiful Lies

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Beautiful Lies

That was the best; it’s never been so good 
You hid your light well and that is not good
You kept me on the edge up to the end
That’s the first time, on that you can depend.

I was so worked up, starting with this
I was anxious, this I so did miss
You did put it, where it needed to go
Right in the middle not too fast or slow.

What will I do, after this day of bliss?
It took you all day to toast and burn this
It was just right with all the runny cheese
Even the burnt bits, you know how to please.

I thank you so much for cooking my lunch
No honest I’m full I ate a late brunch.



27/12/2012 English Sonnet

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  1. Date: 12/30/2012 11:58:00 AM
    Great poem and happy new year to you!

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 3:14:00 AM
    Hi Gg nice to see appreciation of mans efforts lol, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 1:53:00 AM
    Mandy, Your lies are indeed beautiful, and flowing with ease. Have a great 2013. :) Jag

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 11:29:00 PM
    ahh...so lovely..and so cute..enjoyed it so very much :) thanks angel GG for your creative sharing..:) <3

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 5:19:00 PM
    This is good. I enjoyed it very much. Take care Mandy and I wish you the best in the New Year. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 5:13:00 PM
    Yov've such an amazing sense of humor, Mandy! Well written and witty! Happy New Year to you! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 4:48:00 PM
    Crunch, I must take a bite. Lets hope you didn't forget the jam.:)

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 2:37:00 PM
    oh good luck with this in the contest, love your lies...

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 2:30:00 PM
    Cute..Got a chuckle..Sara

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 1:32:00 PM
    Hi Mandy, what a great piece here. Loved the last 2 lines. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 12:45:00 PM
    Nice suspence !! lol Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 12:42:00 PM
    LOL. I got a kick outta this one! :) Tanya