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Beautiful Lies

That was the best; it’s never been so good You hid your light well and that is not good You kept me on the edge up to the end That’s the first time, on that you can depend. I was so worked up, starting with this I was anxious, this I so did miss You did put it, where it needed to go Right in the middle not too fast or slow. What will I do, after this day of bliss? It took you all day to toast and burn this It was just right with all the runny cheese Even the burnt bits, you know how to please. I thank you so much for cooking my lunch No honest I’m full I ate a late brunch. 27/12/2012 English Sonnet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/28/2012 1:53:00 AM
Mandy, Your lies are indeed beautiful, and flowing with ease. Have a great 2013. :) Jag
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Date: 12/27/2012 11:29:00 PM
ahh...so lovely..and so cute..enjoyed it so very much :) thanks angel GG for your creative sharing..:) <3
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Date: 12/27/2012 5:19:00 PM
This is good. I enjoyed it very much. Take care Mandy and I wish you the best in the New Year. Lucilla
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Date: 12/27/2012 5:13:00 PM
Yov've such an amazing sense of humor, Mandy! Well written and witty! Happy New Year to you! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/27/2012 4:48:00 PM
Crunch, I must take a bite. Lets hope you didn't forget the jam.:)
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Date: 12/27/2012 2:37:00 PM
oh good luck with this in the contest, love your lies...
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Date: 12/27/2012 2:30:00 PM
Cute..Got a chuckle..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2012 1:32:00 PM
Hi Mandy, what a great piece here. Loved the last 2 lines. Rollo
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Date: 12/27/2012 12:45:00 PM
Nice suspence !! lol Enjoyed !!
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Date: 12/27/2012 12:42:00 PM
LOL. I got a kick outta this one! :) Tanya
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