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Beautiful Gem

Out in yonder realm, we are beckoned by stars Ushering our wonderment, inviting our gaze Reaching out to us from afar Enthralling us in so many ways We journey to distant planets Their mysteries to explore We sent a rover to Mars And soon we'll do more But while we are up there exploring other realms We suddenly notice a most beautiful gem Perhaps the most precious in the universe Awesome in beauty, priceless its worth It's a jewel indeed, a jewel called Earth! ---- Contest Judged on 5/15/16 ------------------------------

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Date: 8/5/2017 7:19:00 AM
I enjoyed this. Very nice :)
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Date: 5/5/2016 8:12:00 PM
You created a really sweet poem for the challenge, and I see you are putting out more poems than usual these days That is so awesome.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/5/2016 9:49:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..I think it's about the same...
Date: 5/5/2016 2:00:00 PM
What a wonderful sight that must be... I really enjoyed reading this poem very much, Joseph. Nice work!
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Joseph May
Date: 5/5/2016 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Kelly
Date: 5/5/2016 9:21:00 AM
Beautiful indeed!
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Joseph May
Date: 5/5/2016 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Richard
Date: 5/5/2016 2:40:00 AM
Lovely take on the theme Jospeh I especially love the final stanza - yes we do have a precious precious gem - the earth we live on:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 5/5/2016 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Jan

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