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Beautiful Earth

Earth, Planet Of carbon Life forms; spins fast, Three sixty five days And half, a year. Freely spins; Happy Ball.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/1/2014 2:25:00 PM
A lovely write and a very interesting form; I have never tried this before; I'm tempted to write one! I can already make out the syllable formation. cu // paul
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/2/2014 3:17:00 PM
oh, you must try it. They are a lot of fun. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

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