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Beautiful Downfall

Death is the only getaway from pain and sufferings However.. it is beautiful in some kind of way Black shiny coffin, Melody of mourning souls , Endless prayers and flowers... Every living souls will someday get their wretched soul ripped out by the raging ripper Dying The moment where naked eyes see the unseen Head full of vapours Body turns numb Ode on a nightingale .. ceases the mourns and cries Whispers of the black gentlemen slightly halt the tune of prayers.. Some died of suffocation , mortification, suicide , diseases Countless way of death one could ever think Date and time remain as a secret However, Heaven and Hell are the only final destination for the spirits to go to The goods will remain forever with the roaming angels While the wretched, will forever burnt with the devils

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/29/2015 10:42:00 PM
Hi Ashraf, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Ashraf Rudy
Date: 11/30/2015 12:20:00 PM
Wow thats one heartwarming response ive ever haddd thanks dude!!
Date: 11/29/2015 10:06:00 PM
Ashraf, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ashraf Rudy
Date: 11/30/2015 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Linda! Looking forward to read your poemsss.
Date: 11/28/2015 1:59:00 PM
Ashraf, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Ashraf Rudy
Date: 11/30/2015 12:34:00 PM
Hi SKAT. I am still learning and yet not so good with poems and I am looking forward to read your poems and exchange ideas with you. Thanks I appreciate it!

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