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Beautiful Doll

You are such a beautiful doll all I can do is hold your beautiful face On my finger tips in between my hands You have eyes to die for that is if I haven't died already Standing with you in Heaven your skin beautiful and fresh colours your eyes Hair cascading down great Niagra falls on your beauty holding such a dream a paradise in heaven awakens Your parting lips blushing colour of a rose moist like the morning dew one kiss addicted My eyes stolen can only see you a fountain containing so much beauty that fountain flows down around you ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/7/2013 2:15:00 PM

toss a coin in the doll's fountain and your wish will come true : ) Its lovely when a man is able to see the beauty of a woman...This definitely describes a lovely lady through your eyes.. I hope she s beautiful inside as on the outside. uniquely beautiful

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/8/2013 2:30:00 AM

ON SECOND THOUGHTS I WILL LEAVE IT FOR A WHILE TAKING YOUR ADVICE I PUT WINGS IN ONE THAT I WROTE FOR SOMEONE LAST NIGHT HA HA HOPE YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/7/2013 3:17:00 PM

Blush..I dont deserve such verses but tnks..Im speechless..Oki We ll read Ugly doll tomorrow..but just remember sonetimes people dnt want to change and bexome strangers but it just happens.Its sad when it does..but still so much beauty to live for.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 2:56:00 PM

oh i will post ugly doll i wrote it ha ha when she put me through hell i sat and watched her change tomorrow i will post it ,i posted this one for you inside and out you shine beautiful

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 9/7/2013 6:39:00 AM

Nicely written, your poems has a natural fluidity that adds greatly to the poem. Well done.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 1:10:00 PM

THANK YOU SO MUCH DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Kim Van Breda

Date: 9/7/2013 5:56:00 AM

Great admiration penned in this one liam-- your 'beautiful doll' must be beautiful indeed. Enjoyed this xx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 6:25:00 AM

SHE IS ONE OF DREAMS I HAVE NOT MEET HER YET THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2013 11:37:00 PM

a beautiful poem for what must be an amazingly beautiful woman!!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/7/2013 2:12:00 PM

Hey ..this is my friend i was telling you about what great poems she has.Our cup of tea : )

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 5:34:00 AM

STILL HAVE NOT FOUND HER YET BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/6/2013 7:41:00 PM

Wow! Beauty does not get much more perfect than a doll...sounds like you have one in mind....Barbie?...Just kidding!...Hope you do have her near you...A perfectly written poem, Liam! Nicely done!....Please, read my poem "Serenity", sometime.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 5:30:00 AM

THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THIS IS THE RESULT OF THE DOLL IN HELL