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Beautiful

I’m missing you I’m craving you Our love is magical You’re beautiful Every time I see your face I think I’m going to die I feel a heat attack coming on ‘Cause baby you electrify Your soul is pure, you’re full of life When I look in your stormy eyes I know You’re beautiful, you’re beautiful Every time that you’re not looking I get a chance to stare I love the way the light reflects Off of your gorgeous hair You’re so handsome, you’re so cute And you’re intelligent to boot I know You’re beautiful, you’re beautiful I know every line, every shape Every contour of your face I have a dream that recurs You and I in the future Every time I look at you My heart skips a couple beats I feel it start up good and strong ‘Cause baby you are so sweet Taking long walks on the beach Skipping stones and sandy feet I see You’re beautiful, you’re beautiful Every time I kiss your lips I feel like I can fly I shoot into the stratosphere Gravity defied Clouds sitting beneath my shoes Every minute I spend with you I know You’re beautiful, you’re beautiful Couldn’t live without you I’m lost without you We got that cosmic pull You’re beautiful

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2011 11:34:00 AM
Thank you for sharing. It's a very emotional poem. I would suggest maybe tightening it a little bit, and some expressions like "I think I'm going to die," might be considered phrases already used a lot. A poem is at its best when it finds original means of expression.
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