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Beautiful

I look in the mirror and know I should see beautiful, but my beauty is covered by the red stains on my face. I look down at my hands, hoping they will tell me what caused this; my blood stained hands display the battle I've been in. Bruised knuckles, black eyes, broken bones. This battle is daily, unrelenting, victories without peace. I'm told I should be beautiful, people see it in my eyes, but this unending war is disgracing me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/14/2012 10:36:00 AM
This is a very good poem! Thanks for sharing! Jane xoxo
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Date: 7/16/2009 8:52:00 PM
Hey Betty, this is a very sympathetic one. A precise yet heartrending piece. You are such a promising poet. Keep writing. Adeleke
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Date: 7/16/2009 8:42:00 PM
i know how you feel. check out some of my poems
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