Beautiful

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08/22/23

'Beautiful' or' Broken' words

Second place.

Contest by La Constance France

‘ Beauty lies in the eye of the beholder ‘ - Familiar proverb. BEAUTIFUL Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. Everlasting beauty does not occur. Amazing beautiful blossoms droop and wither. Unfading beauty is impossible, whatever. Temporary is beauty by look, not forever. Innocent beautiful child can develoo selfish character. Failure divides Life leaving beautiful success as remainder. Ultimate beauty of life is reflected in moral mirror. Life is a beautiful river losing identity in death harbor..

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Constance La France

Date: 9/11/2023 12:14:00 AM

Anisha, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like the quote too, Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/26/2023 9:53:00 PM

"Ultimate beauty of life is reflected in moral mirror. Life is a beautiful river losing identity in death harbor.." - Great writing as usual. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2023 11:17:00 AM

cool acrostic. I think this form works so well with the contests sponsored by Constance

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/22/2023 8:37:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. Hugs.