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Beats Taking a Bath

Limericks are fun, they bring out the sun Between you and me, they're a whole lot of fun Beats taking a bath Or feeding the cat But not as good as being naughty with someone © Jack Ellison 2015

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Tim Smith

Date: 8/28/2015 1:29:00 PM

Jacks getting his tan laying out in the sun....thinking of limericks and dirty old fun....the sun burnt his brain....he is going insane....he's got ice cream and a fork we better all run

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/29/2015 5:55:00 AM

A fork? Hey you eventually get to the bottom of the bowl because eventually you can drink it!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/28/2015 11:22:00 AM

Nothing is as good as being naughty with someone... for Limmerjack! But we hope... writing Limmericks takes a close second... Cause we like them... And that's no joke!

Carol Eastman
Date: 8/29/2015 10:24:00 AM

Ummm... I've got to be careful what I say and how I say it around you... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/29/2015 5:53:00 AM

I vote for showering together!!!!!! xxx

Jadazzle United

Date: 8/28/2015 9:18:00 AM

Limericks are fun... but I'm never naughty dear brother Jack lol:-) I'm writing with Darren again and he is a terrible influence on me hee hee hee:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/28/2015 9:33:00 AM

Be careful of that Darren guy... heard he can send you down the wrong path!!! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 8/28/2015 9:17:00 AM

Too much waters a weakening!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/28/2015 9:31:00 AM

I've heard that... that's why I limit mine to one every one or two months!!!