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   The Hands Of Time - 119 South Prospect St, Merrill, WI

are these days that pour of subway’s sweat, then emboss night with a vault of celibate, white stars? coffee and newspaper expire as the hours dwindle into clockwork ticks. Liberum Divisa 2 of Gregory R Barden From the poem, Seven Days Posted 10/28/2020

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Date: 11/28/2020 11:07:00 AM
Amazing images of the march of time Nette. Your poems are always choke full of your amazing depth of imagery. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of the season!
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:48:00 AM
Imaginative way of depicting the passing of time. "coffee and newspaper expire as the hours dwindle into clockwork ticks." Excellent, congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 11/26/2020 8:20:00 PM
A very Happy Thanksgiving, Nette - and sincere congratulations on your win in the LIBERUM DIVISA 2 Poetry Contest ... thank you so much for entering, my friend - blessings to you and yours! :-) <3
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Date: 10/29/2020 4:52:00 PM
Great write dear poet! Ya know, I wrote a write sum time ago in a tome I'm working on, it's of a girl who waits for me every day near a church bell tower, and she grows numb to the clocks chime timez; hour by hour, day by many daayz. ????ya??
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James Peranteau
Date: 10/29/2020 4:55:00 PM
Thoze ?????'s weren't supposed to be there ;)
Date: 10/29/2020 8:58:00 AM
Four great lines here...
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Date: 10/29/2020 12:12:00 AM
Hope you're well. Your choice is very pertinent. Best for a win. ~~
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