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Beasts of the Field

The Beasts of the Field Upon this day I took a stroll, To seek some comfort in the wild. I knew that Nature could console, And restless mind be reconciled. In blissful thoughts and reverie, I whiled away a pleasant morn. I spied a robin in a tree; No longer was my mood forlorn. I wandered down a country lane, Uplifted and my faith restored. In spite of gloom and pouring rain My heart was light, my spirits soared. When all at once I saw a farm, A flock of sheep in nearby field. I marvelled at the simple charm That Nature graciously revealed. I watched them as they grazed in peace, In mossy fields of autumn green. All snug and warm in coats of fleece, So sweet of face with loving mien. I took a picture, lost in thought; Such memories are meant to last. I found the peace that I had sought; Serenity, the spell was cast.

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Date: 1/5/2016 1:13:00 PM
What a delightful poem in perfect 8888 rhythm and abab rhyme. You put much effort into this piece and consequently it is so easy to read. We bounce along to a perfect cadence with nary a bump on out journey. BRAVO Faye! TOTALLY enjoyable! Best wishes, Keith (PS I bet you sing hymns in church)
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 2:17:00 PM
Because most hymns follow the 8888 or 8686 rhythms...
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Faye Lowley
Date: 1/5/2016 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Keith for your glowing review, I am so happy you liked it. How did you guess I used to sing hymns in church (It was quite a few years ago in a church in Sweden!)I still love to sing all the time now, too. Best wishes, Faye
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Date: 1/5/2016 1:13:00 PM
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Date: 12/31/2015 9:57:00 AM
A very charming poem, Faye - A delight to read! My best regards...And best wishes for your New Year! :) john
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Faye Lowley
Date: 12/31/2015 11:08:00 AM
Thank you, John for your wonderful comments. I am happy you enjoyed it-I am a nature fanatic! Happy New Year to you, too. Faye
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Faye Lowley
Date: 12/31/2015 11:07:00 AM
Thank you, Michael for your kind comments. I am so happy you liked my poem, I am a sucker for cows and sheep in a rural landscape. Faye
Date: 12/31/2015 6:15:00 AM
Beautiful work, Faye. A very calming and descriptive piece. Great imagery dare I say.
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