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Bear and Salmon

A bear furtively steps on the stones in the swift river. Her cubs eagerly wait on the stone clad shores. A prominent welt lies beneath mother bear’s coat of warmth. The river has both sides lined with palisades of fir trees. Mother bear stands silently as a school of salmon swim into her presence. Misted waters rise to greet a vibrant sky in jubilation. As the salmon fight to traverse ferocious rapids, mother bear listens intently and watches with bated breath in continuous silence. Her cumbersome claw hovers like a weightless mosquito, dancing hitherto for that oh so perfect catch. The blue and gray titanium spray of the rapids avoids her touch. And so, the salmon’s day has come to an end. Mother bear and her cubs have sustenance for the moment. I am just helping out a new soup member with her writing. I have taken her submission and converted it into prose form.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/8/2012 8:59:00 AM
what an endearing way to share your talent, robert... great sequencing and progression of thought that make this story swirl with a refreshing plot...:) huggs!
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Date: 2/8/2012 5:07:00 AM
I like this as it proves you knew what my reasons were in my write and it gives food for thought of how many angles can be perceived and written on one specific subject. the fact that you added cubs changes the dimension of everything although staying in the same vein. Thank you yet again for your time in assisting me. I really appreciate it .. karen
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