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Beacons of Light

As long as man has lived upon this Earth The quest for beacons of light has endured Primitive cultures, man’s earliest ancestors Found wonder in the moon’s allure Upon the seas, more advanced civilizations Made their way guided by celestial orbs Eventually creating historic lighthouses To guide their navigational course Greeks found solace in a light Emanating from Mount Olympus Gods and Goddesses they worshiped Until the discovery of those truly blessed God’s light serves as our beacon now Eternal glow that guides us through storms And when we discover this light’s power The spirit of the believer transforms Satan’s path winds only through darkness Images of eternal suffering emerge When we fail to find the beacon of light And remove the stain of sinful scourge It is man’s choice to pursue radiance or darkness The preferred path is usually lit by the bright For just as early man perceived from the moon Souls are ever drawn to beacons of light *For Wounded Words "Eternal Figures" challenge

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Date: 3/9/2011 1:16:00 PM
WOW!!! Great Work! Happy to see you made it to the triple selection in poetry soup contest! Jancarl
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:10:00 AM
great to see your work here today Carolyn.
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Date: 3/7/2011 6:31:00 AM
Congrats on your triple selections in the soup contest. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/6/2011 7:57:00 PM
really beautifully written work, I enjoyed this one--blessings TK
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:42:00 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn.....another terrific work, and well deserved landing on the featured page!! Best Wishes!!
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:22:00 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your poem "Beacons of Light" being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 1/3/2011 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:15:00 AM
A good write to "light" up the new year, dear Carolyn. Congrats on the selection. Love, dave
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Date: 1/2/2011 10:29:00 PM
~~congratulations on you "featured poem" I love the layout "I really must try that" and I recall this contest 'Eternal Figure' whatever happened to the judging of it~well your poem is definitely 'A WINNER' for this girl "I give it a gold star"~~
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Date: 1/2/2011 3:57:00 PM
what a great write Carolyn, such a subject light! a thousand words could not make a definative answer to its properties, i think you have done real good with so few.
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Date: 11/10/2010 12:23:00 AM
Magnificent write my friend. You have sketched so beautifully the sources of light starting from primitive days and concluding it in the modern era. The exposure of Satan's paths of darkness has increased the importance of light to a very great degree. A beautiful piece of writing and a very uplifting one. Thank you for your unique and precious comments on my Poem ‘Glory of Nation’. I hope you would like ‘Thank you Mr. President’ too. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Carolyn Devonshire
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Date: 9/16/2010 6:26:00 AM
You are one of those beacons of light we look to Carolyn, inspiring us with words that enlighten... Constantly drip feeding within your carefully thought out works.... A delight to have read.... Thanks for your kindness of reading and commenting today, hope all is well, Anna-Marie. x
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Date: 9/12/2010 1:39:00 PM
An amazing write Carolyn! Inspiring to myself for the awesome truth in God, the very precept of life itself! One with reality because of the awesome technicality of the truth itself. Like reality has two parts, truth and truth's moral which is Love. I think these two parts, reality's manifested form, is symbolic of two legs for walking. Like the relationship of truth and love, is as the relationship of our two legs when we walk. You take one leg away we are bound to stumble in our lives. Agape,
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Date: 9/10/2010 6:43:00 PM
Really nice, Carolyn! and an inspirational quatrain. Just lovely. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Love, Caroline.
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:09:00 PM
Carolyn; this is lovely! I find writing this type of poem difficult without having a "forced" rhyme in there somewhere. This flows beautifully. Many thanks for your consideration in the "work" contest; it was appreciated.
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Date: 9/10/2010 3:56:00 PM
Hi carolyn, Enjoyed the read this late evening and all the best for you and thanks for your kind comments!...Enjoy your weekend...Love, Gert
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Date: 9/10/2010 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn for my 7th place in your contest. It is great reading the poems, I am learning so much more about everyone. Good luck with this poem in the contest. It's a winner. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/10/2010 1:16:00 PM
I am better...i went to the ER last night and now at least the fever is gone. Enjoyed your work!!
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:03:00 AM
One more time~ soupmail
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Date: 9/10/2010 10:51:00 AM
Chicken noodle soupmail!!!!!!!Smile
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Date: 9/10/2010 2:20:00 AM
hiya thanks for your kind comments on my poem persecution, yes things have been hard but God carries us through any storm of life, it is sad indeed when a spouse says hurtful things or persecutes us even worse then they are christians too, but hey God made us and he makes us strong, the good news is our suffering only lasts a short while but is nothing compaired to his Glory he will show us later. keep wriitng my dear friend, God bless from diane
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Date: 9/9/2010 1:46:00 PM
Good job, Carolyn! I always lured by the moon! My emotional self allows me to cry when things are good, bad and sometimes indifferent! Thanks so much for your continued support in this magik place!
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Date: 9/9/2010 1:12:00 PM
I think the last line sums up the poem real well. We are always drawn to the light. Too much darkness in the world today.
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:32:00 AM
About "The Kiss." Pure imagination. Ah, though! There have been a number of fantasies. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:58:00 AM
thanks as well Carolyn...enjoyed writing that for your contest :)
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