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Beach Therapy

Translucent turquoise tide pools soft shimmer on the sand, mirrors for vain seagulls, bathtubs for crusty crabs. The tide slap lapping on the beach, cavorting up and down the shore with sounds of gentle laughter mixing tumbling rocks and broken shells. Adrift along a fantasy, stretched out upon the sand; my mind a merry fishhook baiting dreams like fishermen. Above, the sky’s bright powder puff has rouged my cheeks like shells, spritzed freckles across my nose, brown spray amid the swells. Days like these cannot be bought nor pursued as treasured store; you stumble on them, mindlessly, whether rich or whether poor. A gift to lift your hefty load, from life’s harsh grind, reprieve; lay back, let salt sea breezes blow and feel your stress unwind. Copyright, May 1, 2022

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Date: 5/1/2023 11:47:00 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Date: 5/17/2022 1:09:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece Faye filled with wonderful imagery and super metaphors too. Have a great day, Gordon
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Date: 5/11/2022 7:10:00 AM
Dear Faye, I relish the beautiful, mindful, salty-sea-breezy spirit of your amazing poem. Fantastic imagery and metaphors abound - “my mind a merry fishhook / baiting dreams like fishermen” - to capture my heart’s imagination. Beach therapy indeed! An elevating piece, a soothing feast for the senses that satisfies with quiet treasures found in each line as your poem unwinds to a stress-free finale. Congratulations for your contest win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/10/2022 9:39:00 AM
Faye, every line overflows with the joy of a day at the beach. Therapy indeed! Every line is filled with creative wonders - "days... cannot be bought," "spritzed freckles," cavorting waves, "mirrors for vain seagulls!" Well, I could go on and on highlighting the poetic treasures in each line! Congratulations on your win!! Thank you for the blessings of joy! Blessings to you!
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Date: 5/10/2022 7:09:00 AM
Great therapy! Congratulations!
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