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Beach Sunday

Sunday morning tempted me out to the beach As the sun tumbled down its' white warmth Splashing glisters of light on the near flat water; Paparazzi pools of a million flashbulbs. The morning of the last day of the weekend Tipping point between relaxation and drudgery Hours of indulgence line up for their embrace; Hip pockets of foreboding at their climax. Early morning dog-walkers greet huskily Willingly trapped in the endless cycle of pet love A petrol blue Labrador bunkers about; Unleaded freedom amongst the beach grass. Turning, the old train line left-frames the scene Coarse grass yields to sand and sea Near distant the old village shop and pub; Blytonesque imagery from my childhood. Returning home to my lazy Sunday brunch Coherent and intelligible thought pervades Deliberations on tomorrows' toil dissipate As I resolve to live in todays' jigsaw piece.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/3/2015 8:53:00 AM
Hi Brendan...long time. I see that you posted this the week I was away. This reminds me of a recent write by Cona Adams, The Best Reward, she posted it yesterday, I think. So full of imagery that the reader feels the scene is right there...The last line is a fitting conclusion...Carpe diem! Loved this!
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 7/3/2015 11:21:00 AM
Hi Kim, Once again many thanks for your kind words of encouragement. I am fortunate to live beside the beach and a recent walk inspired me to write this. Trying to convince myself to LIVE on Sunday rather than waste it by dreading Monday is a weekly task! Cheers, Brendan

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