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Beach

The horizon cuts straight, long, hard silently declining less than a degree like toys across a cartoon’s one frame stillness a small yacht rocks like a child’s boat a helicopter putters, a small jet silently bellies over the sea thundering suddenly against a graded blue sky children flying a kite a plummeting twisting tied bird in its death throes falling from the warm seemingly red-speckled blue broken only by a smudge of grey cloud curling white-tipped waves swirl against rocks a lonely Zen-meditative crab in their shade the sand, ridged, striated, pockmarked small holes left as bubbling miniature blowholes fine lines webbed around sand rippled like the sea, waved and cleansed a poetic transgression? – Neptune’s impost? the soap-sud foam his in-coming joyful jouissance the thin receding water a pin-spot bridal veil and a bridal train, its white scalloped lace edge pleating, folding, hiding under the next wave in rippling curving line-patterns

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/23/2018 3:43:00 PM
You have a great vocabulary..
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Susan Baquie
Date: 2/24/2018 2:01:00 AM
Th nk you for reading my poetry. I do appreciate it and I will catch up on some of yours as soon as I can.
Date: 11/4/2016 7:34:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery.
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Susan Baquie
Date: 11/4/2016 10:15:00 PM
Thank you for your comment - it is much appreciated

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