Beach

Sea shells on the beach, the tide swiftly moving in, mist hit"s your body, a calm washes over you, feeling soulful and so free.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/30/2010 5:47:00 PM

I was delighted to see this in the winner's circle, Susan. Congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest, susan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 4:53:00 AM

Congratulations Susan on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/29/2010 8:57:00 PM

A lovely memory. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2010 7:34:00 PM

BEauty in feelng! Congrats, susan. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 6:50:00 PM

Congrats Susan on your HM in Rick's Tanka contest... awesome piece.. your numbers on your member page will change if u win in the top ten.. so keep entering the contests... good luck..enjoy your honor..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/26/2010 3:32:00 PM

Nice write....enjoyed.. Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/26/2010 1:45:00 PM

Your tanka leaves the reader feeling relaxed and refreshed. Very nice, Susan! Love, Carolyn