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Be Thy Valentine For a Little While

Please stay a little while longer, Hold me closer if only for a while, Cry if you want I give you my shoulder, Be Thy Valentine For A Little While, Let’s sit and gaze at the moon, While we cuddle after a moments smile, Feel every spasm so sudden so soon, Be Thy Valentine For A Little While, I have the answer to your every wish, Be it a kiss, love, put them in a pile, Let’s live this moment even if in a notion, Be Thy Valentine For A Little While, Feel my heavy breathing down your neck, As I explore the pleasure not found in a smile, So pure is love, am unable to find in a speck, Be Thy Valentine For A Little While, Let’s overdose on insomnia and forget about sleep, As we loose ourselves in quality time for just a mile, If you be the shepherd am no less a sheep, Be Thy Valentine For A Little While, If you leave I pray don’t say goodbye, Sadness would drive me to faint and I won’t revive on salvolitile, Just tell me you’ll be back even if it’s a lie, Be Thy Valentine For A Little While

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/22/2013 6:33:00 PM
Congrats to you..I love the the last stanza especially. BG
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Billy Simani
Date: 2/26/2013 10:53:00 PM
Just tell me you'll be back even if it's a lie... The last stanza was inspired by my girlfriend, she always tells me to tell her ill be back even if its a lie. She hates goodbyes.
Date: 2/22/2013 6:08:00 PM
this one is DARLING. One of the most interesting ones I am seeing on the winners list. Big congrats on your well deserved win.
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Billy Simani
Date: 2/26/2013 10:54:00 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea, its been an honor for me to participate in the poetry contest. My first ever win and i feel like am ready for more.
Date: 2/22/2013 2:03:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Billy Simani
Date: 2/26/2013 10:56:00 PM
Light & Love it is Debbie, seeing all the warm welcoming comments from you guys makes me want to cry... then i ask myself why? That's poetry.
Date: 2/22/2013 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on your big win. Well deserved
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Billy Simani
Date: 2/26/2013 10:56:00 PM
Thanks Connie, i hope i'll keep on impressing you and the whole poetry community.
Date: 2/22/2013 1:47:00 AM
Hi belated congratulations, Billy, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Billy Simani
Date: 2/26/2013 10:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Mandy... am hoping on surprising the poetry community by giving them something to think about. This is my first ever win in a poetry contest and i hope it's one among the many that are going to follow.
Date: 2/21/2013 6:41:00 PM
Congrats Billy ....Seren
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Billy Simani
Date: 2/26/2013 10:47:00 PM
Thank you Seren, thank you sooo MUCH for the support.
Date: 2/21/2013 5:15:00 PM
Hi Billy, Congratulations with your THEES and Thous, :-)..always~ LINDA
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Billy Simani
Date: 2/26/2013 10:42:00 PM
This is more than an Honor... It's a dream come true.
Date: 2/21/2013 4:41:00 PM
I love the line about overdosing on insomnia.......so clever the use of words...and the rhyme scheme is terrific! Congratulations!
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Billy Simani
Date: 2/26/2013 10:44:00 PM
I was inspired by the best, i guess i owe it all to the poetry community as a whole. The atmosphere gives me room to grow poetically... Thanks for the comments.
Date: 2/21/2013 11:54:00 AM
The repitition works in the poem .. Congrats on your win !!
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Billy Simani
Date: 2/26/2013 10:43:00 PM
I try to think outside the box once in a while and i guess this time it worked. Thanks for the support.
Date: 2/15/2013 4:03:00 AM
Just wondering are the commas necessary? But I like the poem.
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