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Be Original - Be You

the natural glow of unfeigned traits of the imperfect outshines fake glittering pretence of the so-called perfect Date: 09/27/2021 Your Best Rhyming Couplet Poetry Contest Sponsor: L MILTON HANKINS

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 5:56:00 PM

so very very true, dear girl, and you are natural pearl!

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/28/2021 7:23:00 PM

Ria... your comment itself is like a couplet... Haha... rhyming too... with correct syllable count... Thank you so much sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani

Jcb Brul

Date: 9/27/2021 9:31:00 PM

Wow, this is amazing! It is always better to be a “TRUE” imperfect than a “false” perfect. This couplet caught me whole. A fav for me. > JCB

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/28/2021 7:21:00 PM

Was surprised to see your name... dear Jcb... What should I call you... Jcb only?... Thank you so much dear for the comment and the fav... Hugs... ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/27/2021 2:41:00 PM

Got that one correct. The fakeness in some situations is so artificial. I like your entry. It reads like a great competitor to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/28/2021 7:15:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Sara for the uplifting comment... Love and respect...~ Ani

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/27/2021 2:34:00 PM

Dear Anitha, your words touch my heart. A "fake glittering" exterior is not being true to who you are. YOU, my sweet friend, are original and amazing, all at the same time. Thank you for being here, for always being you. Many wonderful blessings. :) Hugs, Brandy

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/28/2021 7:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment dear Brandy... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Judy Ball

Date: 9/27/2021 8:22:00 AM

Oh excellent Anitha. So often I have said even a professional actor can only play a part for so long. Sooner or later the REAL you has to emerge. Bravo. God Bless, JB

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/28/2021 7:13:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Judy... yes... so true... Hugs... ~ Ani

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/27/2021 6:34:00 AM

Ani, You are SO very right ! So much conveyed in your few beautiful lines. I love it . Big hugs, Susan :-)

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/28/2021 7:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan... Happy to see you back... I'll go check if you have written anything new... Hugs... ~ Ani

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/27/2021 4:22:00 AM

Many poets ought to read this short poem. Very intelligent. Hugs.

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/28/2021 7:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Victor... I wrote this... in general... not only for poets... God bless... ~ Ani