Be Not Sad

Be not sad. Take comfort in that I am looking down on you. Just like when I was alive. For contest 'Life or death Epigram', sponsor Kevin Shaw 26th July 2018

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James Inman

Date: 8/4/2018 7:45:00 AM

A big smile for this one Viv.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2018 7:05:00 PM

this is lovely, Viv. I think I misunderstood the contest because I am thinking I did not do an epigram!!!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/26/2018 12:14:00 PM

Cleverly worded..a great talent you are, Viv.

John Lawless

Date: 7/26/2018 8:06:00 AM

AH, truth be told.....

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/26/2018 7:34:00 AM

I find this extremely funny, Viv. I think however, if one spends a lifetime looking down on others he would be looking up at them after death:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/26/2018 5:05:00 AM

sentimental writ which comforts me, viv... bring it on!...hugggs

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2018 4:28:00 AM

aww love it Mr Viv:-) For now I'm content being down here and looking up and not the other way round! hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/25/2018 10:42:00 PM

Viv, your very clever and potent pen writes with a keen-edged wit. Love it and a fav! Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Viv Wigley
Date: 7/25/2018 10:57:00 PM

Thanks, Susan, it's not autobiographical, I'm not at all condescending :) Viv x