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Be My Muse(Extended)

Let us write a song write it's music,write it's words Let us Write all day long till the song is in our ears till we feel it in our tears till our heart is falling. Let Those words exist forever, Let those words fill our hearts with hope So we taste it on our tongues the embers popping from it's tune Vibrating turns our souls askew We've created something true Be My Muse and help me spread it Sending it to all with love We created art together Hand in hand, the sky above.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/5/2009 4:32:00 PM
enjlyed reading tonight! hope you are enjoying yourself at poetry soup, we are glad to have you!
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Date: 12/4/2009 1:54:00 PM
Great invite to all on soup to be your poet. Nicely done lines. You commented on my poem "Root". An onion when it comes from the store and you then store it in a dry dark place(hidden) mostly stays firm and the outter part dries out. When you take it out to prepare for food you peel away the outter layers which whole most of the onion scent inside but when peel away the outter layers the odor gets more pungent. People who are not right spiritually can somewhat hide the erring ways. Sara
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:36:00 PM
This is a beautiful song, Michael! Great imagery and flow! Goes to my favs! Thank you for your kind comments! Peace and love, Audrey
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