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Be My Love

Stay with me and be my love
And we will prove all pleasures 
Along the hills of a mountain side 
On an island in the ocean

we can sit upon the rocks
And watch the waves move the sand
By a shallow river to where it falls
Seeing the birds among the roses

Lying in a field so lush 
Gazing into the sky, watching the clouds move
Listen to a brook breathe life
And nature whisper its music

Dancing in the sunlight to every sound
Mesmerized by the twinkle in your eyes
If you are moved by such delights
Then stay with me and be my love

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  1. Date: 4/30/2015 12:54:00 PM
    I really like it. raw and to the point. I have been there and felt the same

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 5:56:00 AM
    - Shannon, I love this sweet poem !!! - Happy Christmas - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 5:34:00 AM
    Shannon, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 4:55:00 AM
    A very touching sweet piece Shannon. hugs Michael

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 11:51:00 AM
    This was a charming piece. Though, I wonder how your feelings are now compared to when this was originally written in '92. Maybe write a follow-up?