Be Mine

Be my serenity when I storm inside Tell me the truth despite urge to lie Be my strength my love my pride Be my peace when I sleep at night Can you be my friend when I am less than Friendly to myself at times understand There is a need for your kind of touch I believe in you and want you my love

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/26/2024 4:11:00 PM

a delightful read. I can relate to your list of 'be mine..."

Karen Jones
Date: 4/26/2024 5:00:00 PM

So happy you get it! Thanks for reading Sara!

Itumeleng Cangua

Date: 4/24/2024 6:01:00 AM

Well written and music to an ear. Keep it up.

Karen Jones
Date: 4/24/2024 6:07:00 AM

Itemeleng thanks for your encouraging comment and compliment! Hugs

Deb M

Date: 4/24/2024 1:58:00 AM

Just beautiful Karen! You made your choice yet hehe?? Debx

Karen Jones
Date: 4/24/2024 2:05:00 AM

Well it seems that one stands above all others. But I want God to choose him not me! Cuz Deb I will screw it up! Ha! So far Kinte seems to be chosen but time will tell! Thanks for reading