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Hey little boy; watcha doin' now? You have that hungry look That "let me show you how" Hey little boy: You better watch it now! Cause I'm a good girl, yeah I'm a good good girl!!! Hey little boy; watcha touchin' now? Your hands are rovin' round my heart's a'goin POW Hey little boy: You better stop it now!! Cause I'm a good girl, yeah I'm a good good girl!!! Hey little boy: watcha thinkin' now? you want this kitty cat? you want to hear her....meow??? Hey little boy: you better take me now!! Cause I'm a bad girl, yeah I'm a good bad girl!! Be a good boy, yeah Come and take me right now... Be a bad boy, yeah Just...let me show you how... Be a good boy, yeah You know you want it now Be a bad boy, yeah Let's get it on...right now! For Casarah Nance's "B" poem

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2015 2:01:00 PM

OH YES, I just knew THIS one would do well in the contest. BIG congrats.

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/1/2015 5:39:00 AM

Congratulations on a great win my little Desert Orchid. Just goes to show how good you are. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2015 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Mr Seal. I don't join many contests. I did join the one Cas had because I know she goes for sensual and sultry....I had a feeling this would do well. Appreciate the visit.

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/31/2015 3:15:00 PM

Wonderful write, made me smile....Seren

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2015 9:54:00 AM

:) Thank you, Seren. I appreciate the visit. Sweet of you.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/31/2015 3:00:00 PM

Congrat on your awesome win........A.M.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2015 9:54:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Afolabi. I appreciate it.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 7/31/2015 10:05:00 AM

Hi Eileen, congrats on your win dear!! I really enjoyed your poem.. so I'm a good girl ,too yeah !!! I love that !! :O))

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2015 9:55:00 AM

:) Thanks, sweetie. So nice of you to pass by. I'm glad you liked this write...and that you're a good girl too! ;)

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/31/2015 9:50:00 AM

Wahooo !! This kitty cat is feline good !! Congrats to the cat !!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2015 9:56:00 AM

I had a good time with this one, Carrie. :) A bit of a naughty write, but I knew Cas goes for naughty, so.....I wasn't too worried. I appreciate the visit. Hgus

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/31/2015 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations Eileen, I see we chose the same title. This is as Casarah puts it "Purrfect!"

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2015 9:57:00 AM

Yes...I thought that was part of the rules...to show which of the Be topics you have chosen. Thanks for the lovely compliment. I love writing for Cas. She's awesome.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/31/2015 7:31:00 AM

I like the way you get good...Purrfect!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2015 9:58:00 AM

You made my day, sweetie. I know you don't mind naughty writes....You write with heart and soul. I'm so happy this caught your eye. You've given me lots of joy. Hugs

James Inman

Date: 7/31/2015 7:30:00 AM

Playful and seductive.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2015 9:58:00 AM

Thank you, James. Those are two lovely adjectives you have chosen for this write. :)

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2015 1:20:00 AM

Eileen, congratulations on your win. It is very nice to you on here. Love SKAT

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2015 9:59:00 AM

Thanks for passing by, Skat. Really sweet of you. :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/30/2015 11:49:00 PM

Deffo, Eileen. I assume it isn't autobiographical, you little vixen x

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/31/2015 12:06:00 AM

I even have a tune for it in my head. I "Performed" it for family....It really should be heard. It just come together very quickly. I know Cas likes romantic and sensuous and passionate. It was a pleasure to write for her.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/31/2015 12:04:00 AM

Oh.......I had a limerick posted about my Naughty Kitty..... deleted it, but perhaps will repost soon. Never assume, dear....never assume. :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/30/2015 11:44:00 PM

Sassy. x

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2015 11:47:00 PM

Thanks, Viv. Take it you liked it. Congrats on your win as well....

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 11:07:00 PM

Magnificent write my dear Eileen, u hv undoubtedly an amazing pen! Congrats on ur win!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/31/2015 12:05:00 AM

Thank you dear sweet Dr Upma. I so appreciate your visit. This poem just came to me....It took me very little time....I'm glad you like it. Hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/30/2015 9:05:00 PM

Eileen, you penned a great piece. No wonder you got 1st place in the contest. Congratulations! :-)Alexis

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/31/2015 12:08:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Alexis. So kind of you to visit and congratulate me. Some poems take a lot of work...the words don't seem to want to come together. This was an easier piece and is really a song in my head....Thanks for visiting, sweetie! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/26/2015 5:02:00 AM

This teases and tempts at the same time, Eileen. A good composer would make a hit out of these lyrics! Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/27/2015 12:33:00 PM

I hope it is Censor approved and isn't too erotic or too sensual or too...whatever. It's tasteful to me....anyway. Let's hope Cas likes it. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/25/2015 9:00:00 AM

You shouldn't hesitate entering it, it's sexy and a whole lot of fun. Ooh la la licious!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/27/2015 12:35:00 PM

I did enter it....Just today. Let's hope! ;) Hugs Hey....maybe Ooh la la licious could serve as a category...acceptable and not to be censored. :) Hugs

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/24/2015 7:51:00 PM

I absolutely love this! It kind of reminds me of a song I listened to recently on youtube called Bad Little Boy by Ashe, I believe the youtuber's name is. It's different though, it just reminded me of it. Very teasing like. Love this Always, Laura

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/24/2015 10:52:00 PM

Thanks, Laura. I haven' heard the song you are referring to. I've always wanted to write lyrics....it doesn't come easy for me, but this just popped in my head and wouldn't stop until I got it down. Ten minutes from start to finish, perhaps. :) Thanks for the visit. Hugs

David Brown

Date: 7/24/2015 7:12:00 PM

Meee-ow! Wow!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/24/2015 10:53:00 PM

:) David. That's a comment that I LIKE! Thanks for the visit, dear. I will swing around to you soon. Hugs

Richard D Seal

Date: 7/24/2015 5:35:00 PM

What's new pussycat. I'm sure glad I'm a good boy that can resist temptation my little Desert Orchid lol. These are great lyrics for a song. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/27/2015 12:35:00 PM

Well, it's good to know, Mr Seal. It's good to know.

Richard D Seal
Date: 7/25/2015 4:45:00 AM

Now that is an offer I can't resist lol

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/24/2015 10:55:00 PM

You're a good boy, eh? Well, Mr Seal....that's your own opinion, dear. I'm a good girl. Most of the time...and if I'm naughty....I'm naughty and nice. Thanks for the visit, Richard. I'm still waiting for you to post a poem. You are in my folder of favorite poets, as you are well aware, so do be good and write. I promise to visit and annoy you on a regular basis.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 2:30:00 PM

woohooo I think the cat has got the cream with this seductive write Eileen! hugs jan xx7

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 2:46:00 PM

oh the refrain is brilliant Eileen it is buzzing in my brain lol :-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/24/2015 2:36:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. I'm not so sure about the refrain. It sings well in my head, but.....Thanks for your comment on my blog. Is the blog too much? I don't want to cause problems, but I'm tired of some of the talk around here. Hugs