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Be Free

(Note: Special thanks to my cousin Joel Sumilang, whose butterfly painting inspired me to write this poem.) Be Free (Joy Ditching-Lorico) (Manila, 6 September 2009, 11:00pm) In God’s little garden, wildflowers grow Beauty meets the eyes, wind starts to blow Bushy plants with translucent dots Serrated leaves amidst yellow spots Brilliant sun casts rays on the meadow A winged little creature crawling so low God watches as it flutters and stalls Wonders why it tries and still falls Looking closely God sees why This dainty beauty seems to cry For both wings appear quite strong But there must be something wrong From a chrysalis the beauty emerges Already done with life’s rapid changes Complete metamorphosis has come The world outside beckons a welcome But winged creature is still trapped In a cocooned life that was mapped Fears and doubts fill the heart Flying high can’t seem to start So God whispered in the wind to say Go, my beauty please don’t stay Trapped in your past day and night Never fear and go see the light For I love you so, my dear Don’t be imprisoned by fear It is your mind that holds you back For something that you don’t lack Winged little creature sighed For quite some time it cried With courage wings started flapping Buoyed by wind butterfly began flying God watched as His butterfly soar His dainty little creature no more He whispered into the air a plea Go, my child, and BE FREE!

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Date: 3/23/2016 12:27:00 PM
enjoying this one again, Josefa. LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one again. SKAT
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Date: 6/29/2013 4:05:00 PM
Josefa, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2013 10:33:00 PM
Hello Elvira, heartfelt... enjoyed dropping by :-) -WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side. Hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"
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Josefa Elvira Lorico
Date: 6/28/2013 12:34:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, for dropping by and for inviting me to your latest contest. Though, being new here, I'm still trying to figure out what these contests are all about. Maybe discovering PoetrySoup by chance is like finding a new home for expressing my thoughts about anything and everything. Looking forward to reading your poems...glad to have my first poet friend here :-)

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