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Stinking, rancid meat,
Injected, colored, perfumed;
Ready for retail.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/9/2009 1:59:00 PM
Nicely written Haiku. Sara
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Date: 7/14/2009 2:26:00 AM
I think I may have eaten this meat last year, the last line is great.
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Date: 7/12/2009 5:47:00 PM
Quite an apt commentary (unfortunately) on our society. I wouldn't call it a haiku though - since it is not about nature. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/12/2009 8:29:00 AM
i dont like this meat-but i like this Haiku and very original title--:)charma
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Date: 7/11/2009 2:08:00 PM
Hence the organic my friend ! Powerful write James !! james
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Date: 7/11/2009 1:22:00 PM
not bad
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