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Battlefield of Love

Battlefield of Love Us against the world This battlefield of love Weapons loaded We smile bright Our happiness a target Were prepared for war We march forward

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Skat A

Date: 4/16/2013 5:03:00 PM

Melanie :-) . Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

Kim Van Breda

Date: 4/11/2013 12:14:00 PM

So true-- exceptional desriptive in short prose.