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Battlefield Blues

seconds before what was blurs crashing waves sinking my lost smile penny whistle and guitar fluttered above your sweet memory inside shrunken heads amid tightly woven mouths rain fell for days all I had left was an old war bugle I heard it proper once rain hides my tears sonny said it belonged to his dad sound carried all the way to the enemy camp at nightfall penny whistle and guitar fluttered above your sweet memory maybe home won't go away the rain fell for days the rain fell for days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/16/2013 2:00:00 PM
War breeds no good offspring! You got it wrapped up nicely.
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Date: 7/15/2012 9:21:00 PM
Hi Jim...war is so ugly and costly in every way. No one can tell me they see a good side to war because I wouldn't agree. Now on the other hand, while in such a place thinking of home will seem like heaven. deep expressions. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 7/11/2012 10:26:00 PM
Yes like it James...like the way you ended the poem...much enjoyed!!!
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Date: 7/1/2012 2:58:00 PM
We all must leave before like Dorothy we realize there is no place like home. Good one jimbo. Light & love
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Date: 7/1/2012 12:19:00 PM
Sad one about love loss..Enjoyed the emotive, expressive and descriptive work..Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:14:00 PM
Very good poem James....come to Norway we have a lot of rain - I can hides my tears often....lol..... - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/29/2012 12:19:00 PM
nice write James
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