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Battle Scars

In the late of spring Through the warm divide As a whisper fades On the evening tide When the darkness comes And engulfs the light To betray each day And renounce the fight A wit of steel On a sharp reprise With a gentle tear In his crimson eyes Like a beaten lion When it smells defeat In the bitter cold As the skies retreat It's not the melody From a broken song It's the battle scars That will make us strong When love has gone To a distant place Don't forget the kindness Of true love’s face 21-May-2012

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Date: 9/7/2016 7:12:00 AM
Pleasing assonance alliteration and rhythm ... the scars get concealed ...
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Kaelan Fox
Date: 9/14/2016 6:26:00 AM
Thank you for reading :)

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