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Battered and Worn

Soar through the night sky Ye Starlings with tattered wings. Paradise awaits!

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Gareth James

Date: 4/11/2010 2:27:00 AM

fantasic Haiku. And also thank yyou for supporting my contest.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/8/2010 3:57:00 PM

great write, I am having a hard time with it.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/8/2010 2:40:00 PM

Goooooodddddd onnnnnnnneeeeeeeee indeed.Keep the pen flowing..Charma

Rick Parise

Date: 4/8/2010 2:18:00 PM

Always hope for a brighter day. Nice write Thanks, Rick~~~~~~~~Salem,Oregon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/8/2010 1:10:00 PM

Excellent my friend and should definitely place in the winners circle... great title too...good luck ...my entry is "Flight"... what else? luv.. someone just commented on our Heaveny Valentine Rose poem a few minutes ago.. a newbie at that... still has impact...thought u would like to know... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Royal Trevino

Date: 4/8/2010 12:47:00 PM

Sweet!