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When it isn't asleep it will be Upside down from the branch of a tree By it's instinct it knows To keep eyes and mouth closed Every time it needs to have a pee. For contest ' make me laugh', sponsor Christine Lehmann 26th August 2016

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Date: 8/29/2016 2:12:00 PM
Sure made me laugh - oh where the Viv mind goes. I hadn't thought of the possible dilemma bats have hanging upside down and I just love it that you did ... CayCay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/29/2016 2:22:00 PM
When I was little I thought it happened to Australians, too.... thanks for dropping by, CayCay. Viv x
Date: 8/28/2016 10:56:00 PM
This is a good one, Viv! Made me laugh--a 7. Janice
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Date: 8/29/2016 1:12:00 AM
Thanks, Janice, I aim to please, usually miss. Viv x
Date: 8/28/2016 4:58:00 AM
Excellent, Viv! If this doesn't make the sponsor laugh, then nothing will! All the best. // paul
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Date: 8/29/2016 1:13:00 AM
Thanks, Paul, I suppose Sloths and bats must be the smelliest creatures on the planet. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/28/2016 12:24:00 AM
ops I am just adding a little humor, my ex wasn't that bat crazy!
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Date: 8/28/2016 12:23:00 AM
At first I thought, oh my, is this about my ex, then I realized no this is about Bats!!! :) Hilarious Viv
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Date: 8/28/2016 12:45:00 AM
You sure know how to pick 'em, Arthur. Thanks for dropping by. regards, Viv
Date: 8/27/2016 12:53:00 PM
- :)))) a good one, Viv :))) - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/27/2016 11:55:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, not a nice mental picture, I know, but..... x
Date: 8/27/2016 7:59:00 AM
Great one, Viv. I like the way you think! Lol
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Date: 8/27/2016 8:34:00 AM
Upside down, apparently. Thanks, Daniel. regards, Viv
Date: 8/27/2016 6:59:00 AM
ha ha ha great one Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2016 8:34:00 AM
Not quite poop, Jan, but I try. Viv x

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