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Before bed, have a hot Bath with berry-scented Bubbles or some perfumed Bath salts. Lose your stress or Be sensuous! Enjoy Bliss! Better yet, at the Beach, bathe in the warm sun! Written Aug. 16, 2016 for Km Merryman's Pleiades B Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/6/2016 6:40:00 AM
you make me want to go relax in the bath now lady! I love my baths lol I would rather take a bath than bathe in the sun for some reason! beautifully written and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/21/2016 1:20:00 PM
Nothing better than a relaxing bath, Andrea, if you can afford the time! No problem with the beach; I go swimming regularly, but have learnt to avoid extra sun exposure. Congrats on this fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/20/2016 9:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 8/20/2016 9:05:00 AM
Relaxing imagery, Andrea. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/20/2016 8:44:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 8/20/2016 4:25:00 AM
I am happy your poem did so well Andrea. Congratulations! ; ) 7
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Date: 8/19/2016 8:03:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your win! Reading your relaxing poem made me want to stop what I was doing and run a bubble bath. Blessings!
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Date: 8/19/2016 5:35:00 AM
Ah! What a way to relax at the end of the day:)
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Date: 8/17/2016 4:07:00 PM
Ahhhh, there is nothing like a hot bath to relax the body. I love your entry Andrea. I'm sure this will do really well in the contest! ; ) 7
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Date: 8/17/2016 11:54:00 AM
Great...how relaxing and full of bilss...bathe...well expressed! :) Sunita
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Date: 8/17/2016 6:41:00 AM
- Lovely written, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/17/2016 1:32:00 AM
I need both the bath and the swim : ). Manytimes I take a quick shower.I do need to fill that tub with soapy water..and I am tomorrow heading for the beach with my childhood bestfriend and our kids..Wish you could join us dear. : ) Lovely poem.
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Date: 8/16/2016 10:17:00 PM
An upbeat piece of rejuvenating charm! Delightful writing, a treat to read :-) My best to you in the contest blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/16/2016 9:33:00 PM
bbbbeautiful write. should do well nice flow!
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Date: 8/16/2016 9:25:00 PM
Hi Andrea, It sounds sooo relaxing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/16/2016 9:18:00 PM
Sounds blissful Andrea...Very nicely penned...
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