Baskin-Robbins Ice Cream

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Written 7/16/23

8,8,5,5,8 syllables per howmanysyllables.com

Baskin-Robbins makes great ice cream, To taste each flavor, a wild dream. One teaspoon of each, Would rob me of speech, As I'd soon be busting my seam.

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Len Gasun

Date: 7/24/2023 5:01:00 AM

That's really a generous taste my dear poet friend Kim. I love your limerick a lot painting continuous smiles on my face. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/25/2023 6:55:00 PM

Thank you, Len!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/23/2023 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A cute write. Just one spoon full of each flavor. Oh Please!!! Will that really hurt??? Hahaha!!! Have a great day/week.......................

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/25/2023 6:54:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/23/2023 5:06:00 AM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick, love the last line!

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/25/2023 6:54:00 PM

Thank you, Tania, for my placement in your contest! It was fun!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2023 2:26:00 AM

I would match up with that last line myself because I can put on the weight without very much trouble. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Congratulations. Way to go. Your visit to my page with congratulations was encouraging. Sara

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/25/2023 6:53:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!