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Bask In the Moonlight

Oh dear child, no crying tonight Don't get tied up With the heart and mind's fight Dear child, look towards the moon Let the illumination penetrate your soul It will all be better soon Oh dear child, set your eyes on the moon's glow Vision your happiness And just let go Dear child, let go of your worldly desire Open your heart and mind Soon the conflicts will retire

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Brittany Larson

Date: 9/9/2014 3:05:00 AM

Wow great first write! I give you a warm welcome to the Soup. With this wonderful gift you have I can already tell you will fit right in here! Love to all-Brittany

Paul Callus

Date: 8/27/2014 1:22:00 PM

Hey, Princess! Lovely poem to start your experience on Soup. What a way to search for positivity in the moon's welcoming gaze! Welcome to soup as well:) // paul

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/15/2014 3:35:00 PM

Nice! I liked it :) the last two lines are pithy.

Christian Alexander

Date: 8/15/2014 9:47:00 AM

I like it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2014 9:36:00 PM

Hi Princess, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/13/2014 12:07:00 AM

Princess,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Daver Austin

Date: 8/12/2014 11:14:00 AM

Maybe a lullaby to a sick child. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2014 8:23:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,P. Xia - I choose your first pretty written prose poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Princess Xia
Date: 8/10/2014 3:03:00 PM

Thank you so much. And thanks for the welcome (: This is actually my third poetry forum I am on. But I hope I can fit into this family as well!