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Basic Blessing

There, a note lays on the table And I would read it, if I were able I move the candle a little nearer In hopes to make its message clearer My heart is racing, my hands now sweating But, my mind tells me there's no use fretting Will she stay or is she going Time must tell, for there's no knowing Lines on paper I could heed If only I had learn to read

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/14/2015 5:50:00 AM
Oh this is excellent,the last line nicely sums up the whole poem and gives it the adequate punch it needs.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/14/2015 9:47:00 AM
Thank You Miraj

Book: Shattered Sighs