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Basement

Stillborn static cry Smothered screeching granite knife Crimson chalk demise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 2/28/2009 5:55:00 PM
Yikes! Sounds pretty scary to me. The vivid imagery carries your thoughts in a creative way. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing! Karen
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