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Days of youth, spending time tossing that white pellet. Learning how to play was sometimes heartless as losses were an injury which was difficult to take. As time went, so did the misunderstandings of the game, but instead left a deeper love for its nuances. Where to move on each play, who covered which base, cutoffs, and the defensive attitude in mind when on the field. Looking to see if the coach had enough faith to put your name in the lineup for that day's game. Every pitch became important. Every batted ball became the hit you wanted. Every member of the team became your friend for life. Don't let them down with an error or strikeout. Be their hero with the saving catch or drive in the winning run. Baseball on green fields Pastime of all my summers All American game.

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Date: 8/4/2017 11:58:00 AM
I am so happy to see this make the list Dan. This is a great haibun! Congratulations! ; )
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 8/7/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Connie. I reread some of yours to get the incorporation of words correct. I appreciate the help!
Date: 8/2/2017 6:29:00 PM
Nicely done , Dan, baseball, softball is the entertain game around my family for years as my grandchildren exceed in the games ... Congratulations on your win ... ~*
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 8/3/2017 4:01:00 AM
Thanks Eve. I have known the game from perspective of player, coach, and fan. My son never played, so I will not have that thrill. As a former coach, however, I will say that the kids really appreciate your following and encouragement. May their bats be filled with hits. Thanks, again.
Date: 8/2/2017 4:02:00 PM
Congrats, Dan! Green grass of a youthful summer!
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 8/3/2017 3:40:00 AM
Thanks Kim. I'm a baseball fanatic and only wish I had more summers left in me than I have left behind. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/2/2017 3:43:00 PM
Ah the memories!
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 8/3/2017 3:36:00 AM
At this point in life, memories are what keeps us going...(me at least). Thanks for the read and comment.
Date: 7/31/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Connie. I took a page from one of your poems to get this going. I really like the way yours flowed for this contest. Good luck !
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Date: 7/30/2017 9:01:00 PM
What clear memories you have of your youth or perhaps a vivid imagination. This is wonderful Dan! You have brought to light the dreams of a young boy searching to belong. : )
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