Baseball

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written about a year ago

the battle of the bats never to be won or lost a game of baseball playing over time the field flooded with lights to win the night a colony of bats hanging from trees near by comes to visit and scare the hell out of the batters running for home base

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/24/2015 12:28:00 AM

Excellent write Catherine, your poem is so interesting, I enjoyed it.....good luck in the contest..........Afolabi.

Catherine Labeau
Date: 5/25/2015 7:14:00 AM

no contest too out of norms

Eve Roper

Date: 5/23/2015 6:50:00 PM

Oops, bats not one of my favorite rats. They do swoop over you at night since they cannot see. a 7 for this humours write

Eve Roper
Date: 6/1/2015 1:15:00 PM

I know they have rader that is why I said the swoop over you, I just didn't finish my sentence. I lived in Oregon for years where they are always flying around and they come pretty close

Catherine Labeau
Date: 6/1/2015 11:26:00 AM

are you blind they have a radar take the time to watch them hanging in caves they will survive you

Catherine Labeau
Date: 5/23/2015 7:52:00 PM

one of my favorite as a child I loved their velvet feel and they come out to eat all the gnats ennoying you I love my swallows too coming back to get rid of mosquitoes