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Bars

well, if you take them you will end up behind them is that what you want?

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  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:49:00 PM
    wow.. Dana, i do not want them bars... good haiku...linda

  1. Date: 10/14/2011 2:48:00 PM
    Well said. You own drugs... and they'll own you.

  1. Date: 10/10/2011 8:06:00 PM
    I think that you mean if one goes to bars and gets drunk, they could end up in trouble with the law or their family or trouble with themselves..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and leaving a kind review about my work..Sara

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    Date: 10/10/2011 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "bars" is another word for Xanax, which is a really abused drug where I live. It's an anti-anxiety medication that kids are always trying to get their hands on. I won't deny trying to get my hands on it in my last psychiatrist appointment, haha.
  1. Date: 10/9/2011 9:01:00 PM
    PEOPLE LIVE IN PRISON INSIDE THEIRSELVES DEAR LADY, i DO NOT DRINK ANYMORE BUT THAT IS NOT NECCESSARILY TRUE BUT IT IS GOOD ADVICE FOR SOMEONE YOUNG. MY CHILDREN RARELY DRINK AND AT HOME. iS THIS WHAT YOU MEANT BY THIS POEM? tHANKS FOR SHARING, lu

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 3:45:00 PM
    Well said.Thanks for enjoying my work,I too enjoy yours....Have a great day......Kacey