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Barrier Island

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What weighs down this sandy wisp between a bay and ocean is not a causeway, not the press of footed towers, nor the tread of bare and browning bathers on its narrow, wet, khaki-colored beaches -- It is the weight of air, cloudless, clear but heavy air -- blue in the depths -- that arches overhead; and it is the sizzle of minor surf along the island's edges, dampening sand, to stick upon the sea like a licked stamp upon a letter. The men, roads, and condos all may seem to wrest control from nature and its weather; but, we, who've spent some years here, know better.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2012 8:12:00 AM
The visuals you present are very interesting. I've always been land locked.
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:29:00 PM
Light airy refreshing. A Lovely read. I wish I could find that lightest of touches but I seem to dig to deep.Yes hope ore people hit upon this and more. Love it. Good luck. Rgds I Ian
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Date: 6/8/2011 9:03:00 PM
this is so poetic, Leo. you are quite talented. I hope more people might see this one. Free verse at its finest.
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