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Bargain Bucket

Bargain bucket just for me Pigged out for my tea Spicy chicken breasts and thighs And bags of French fries Pass the bucket quick As I feel Sick! For Gwen's Fast Food Epulaeryu contest

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 5/9/2011 7:41:00 AM

Very clever! Congrats on your win Jack!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/7/2011 7:01:00 AM

Congratulations Jack on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/7/2011 2:35:00 AM

yumy, yummy jack! best cheers for your stunning win! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2011 8:51:00 PM

I LOVED yours, Jack. Congrats on your win!

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 5/6/2011 3:24:00 PM

Been there, done that. Good job. Congrats.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2011 2:41:00 PM

Gosh, I missed this one earlier, Jack, but I love it. Fried chicken (fried food in general) usually makes me feel sick. Enjoyed the humor! Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/6/2011 1:49:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your big win in the fast food contest with this super yummy write luv.. enjoy another tasty win with luv..

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/6/2011 12:57:00 PM

Mmmmm I love bargain buckets, lovely! Great win, I feel like KFC tonight! X

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/6/2011 12:09:00 PM

Nice funny Eulaeryu and dual purpose bucket was great idea. Congrats on your win Jack...gautami

Kash Poet

Date: 5/6/2011 12:02:00 PM

Congrats jack on yet another top win!--kash

James Foulk

Date: 5/5/2011 11:48:00 AM

I have not eaten lunch yet, after reading this i need to go eat soon. this was a great piece you wrote Jack. thank you for commenting on Night Train Whistle.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/1/2011 7:29:00 AM

Wonderful entry to the contest, but I can't enjoy being a veg, jack

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/30/2011 8:23:00 PM

The fast food bargain chicken and emesis bucket! Cool concept. Jack, thanks for supporting the contest...it has been way too much fun! God's blessins' Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2011 4:19:00 PM

hahaha, another purpose for the bucket!! LOVE that ending. Glad you got my play on words , spare the "rod" and spoil the child?? heehee. Have a great weekend.