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Barefoot Waltz

Merge with me in a summer waltz, our arms entwined, our fingers laced. Your scented skin strokes my face, tickles, prickles, excites, ignites; barefoot we skim the clovered green. The park surrenders, hides shy eyes; when tender lips brush whispered kiss where the sun softly beams blush bliss. Faye Gibson Copyright, August 29, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/8/2015 9:10:00 AM
Faye, Congrats on your sense of touch win. **SKAT**
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:08:00 PM
wonderful and happy poem, Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/7/2015 2:58:00 PM
i think this is one of the best pieces i've read in this contest, some superb rhyme and alliteration; deserved a higher placing really (in my opinion, anyway) congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/6/2015 7:54:00 PM
Fabulous write, Faye, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/6/2015 12:25:00 PM
this makes me want to just prance along with your swaying words, faye...thanks for joining my contest and warm congrats!
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Date: 9/6/2015 10:36:00 AM
Lovely write Faye...Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/6/2015 7:57:00 AM
Subtly besutiful poetry Faye, congrats on big win!
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