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Barefoot In Paradise

BAREFOOT IN PARADISE There is a special place That my memory serves, Far beyond worldly eyes Barefoot in Paradise Where is a perfect light From no sun, and me free Padding, weightless, ‘neath blue sky Barefoot in Paradise Where is tranquil music From no man-crafted source Where I need only listen Barefoot in Paradise Though indescribable, A rainbow of colors Will surround and kindly blend Barefoot in Paradise May I now sit me down, Mantra inwardly humming, To seek the light and sound. Barefoot in Paradise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/12/2013 6:23:00 PM
Contemplation/meditation,as though an astral voyage, Daver. Enjoyed this piece...the teeming life and vitality of the weightless mind meandering. Very refreshing.:) Love, Mikki
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:02:00 PM
Nice one Daver, really enjoyed the imagery.
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Date: 11/7/2013 4:26:00 PM
LOVE this one, Daver. So good to see when you put your new posts up!!
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Date: 11/6/2013 4:37:00 PM
You have described a nice dreamlike place that would make a great escape from the squalor of reality.
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Date: 11/4/2013 8:44:00 AM
serenity at its best, daver... i feel this when i do yoga or simply reflect on the wonder of our paradise... totally inspiring and lovely..:) huggs
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Date: 11/4/2013 5:44:00 AM
Created write on the creation,
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Date: 11/3/2013 1:37:00 PM
- Beautiful place to run barefoot ..... I love going barefoot :)) - Lovely paradise,Daver ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 11:39:00 AM
Look its alright a'goin barefoot in paridise but if'n yore in the mountains don't say the B-A-R-E word to often in case one of the furry varity is listening in; Daver then it'll be time to hot foot it outt'a there...L O L)) look it was good to hear from you regarding my Lunar fiddling write; if you are in hailing distance with the pea green boat warn it to steer clear of nasty rapids if any help needed i have towing facility..! Take care all..!
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